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同文部小学 英语创意写作获奖作品展示

在同文小学部，英语写作是一件快乐的事情。学期末同文小学的英语老师们对同学们的写作作品进行了评比，快来看看获奖同学的作品吧。

In Tongwen primary school, English creative writing is a happy thing. At the end of the semester, the English teachers evaluated the students' writing works. Come and have a look at the works of the winning students.

-Grade 1  一年级-

If I Were an Animal  

如果我是动物

作者：Noah  国籍：中国  

指导教师：Patrick&Zack

If I were an animal, I would be a snake. I would have sharp teeth and fangs.I will use my fangs to inject venom into people.I will be sneaky and everyone cannot see me!I can even live in the sea. Everyone will stay away from me. I eat meat, vegetables and even people.If I saw everyone, I will eat them. “hahaha!”I would cry before I devoured them. If anyone sees me they will be extremely scared and they will run so far from me and they will run so fast. Faster than a car. They will say:“Help! There’s a snake, a huge snake, RUN!”I will chase them and they couldn’t run faster than me. If Mr.A sees me, I will eat him, too! “Ha ha ha!”

如果我是动物，我想成为一条蛇。我有锋利的牙齿和尖牙。我会用我的毒牙向人们注射毒液。我会鬼鬼祟祟的，每个人都看不到我！我甚至可以住在海里。所有人都离我远点。我吃肉、蔬菜甚至人。如果我见到所有人，我会吃掉他们。“哈哈哈！”我会在吞食它们之前哭泣。如果有人看到我，他们会非常害怕，他们会跑得离我很远，跑得很快。比汽车还快。他们会说：“救命！有一条蛇，一条大蛇，快跑！”我会追着他们，他们跑不比我快。如果A先生看到我，我也会吃掉他！“哈哈哈！”

I’m a Dolphin

我是海豚

作者：Osborn   国籍：中国  

指导教师：Patrick&Zack

If I were an animal, I would be a dolphin. I would have sharp teeth to eat fish in the ocean.I would jump in the waves and I would play ball all day long. I would go to the zoo because it is so fun, I can play much more. I have a tail. I use my tail to swim fast and to eat fish.I would have a big mouth to swallow the little fish. I would have a lot of fish to eat. The zoo is so fun and I saw Mr.A in the zoo.I said “Hello!”Mr.A said “Hello!” to me. I play ball and Mr.A swims with me. I am so happy and Mr.A goes to the next place. I say:“Bye” to Mr.A. Mr.A says “bye” to me, and I was so happy.

如果我是动物，我想成为一只海豚。我会有锋利的牙齿去吃海里的鱼。我会在海浪中跳跃，整天打球。我会去动物园，因为它太有趣了，我可以玩得更多。我有一条尾巴。我用尾巴游得快，吃鱼。我会有一张大嘴巴来吞下这条小鱼。我会有很多鱼吃。动物园很有趣，我在动物园里看到了Mr.A。我说“你好！”A先生说：“你好！”对我来说。我打球，Mr.A和我一起游泳。我很高兴，Mr.A去了下一个地方。我对A先生说：“再见”。A先生对我说“再见”，我很高兴。

-Grade 2  二年级-

Alex the Cat and the Ugly Monster

Alex的猫和丑陋的怪物

作者：Aaron   国籍：中国 

指导教师：Samina&Zack

Alex lives under the sea. Alex is very small. Her home is cute and it's never cold. Alex likes reading about monsters. Alex is crazy and she's silly. There are lots of burgers and coke bottles in her house. Alex is a magical cat. She doesn't like noise, but she likes running and eating with her sister. She isn't very big, but she is so happy.

It's a sunny Sunday morning, and Alex wants to play with her toys. However her stepfather says “Go to school!” So Alex goes to school. 

Later that morning, she meets a horrible monster. The horrible monster has a very big head and a mouth with black teeth. He has blue ears with hair on them. He has a small tummy like a goat. The ugly monster says “You look so fed up. Can I help you?” Alex thanks the hideous monster and the frightful monster gives her one wish. Alex asks to play with her toys. 

Then suddenly the repulsive monster disappears, and Alex wakes up. She gets out of bed to check if she still needs to go to school. 

Alex住在海底。Alex很小。她的家很可爱，而且从来不冷。Alex喜欢读关于怪物的书。Alex疯了，她很傻。她的房子里有很多汉堡和可乐瓶。Alex是一只神奇的猫。她不喜欢噪音，但她喜欢和姐姐一起跑步和吃饭。她不是很大，但她很高兴。

这是一个阳光明媚的周日早上，Alex想玩她的玩具。然而，她的继父说:“去上学!” 所以Alex去上学。

那天早上晚些时候，她遇到了一个可怕的怪物。这个可怕的怪物有一个非常大的头和一个有黑色牙齿的嘴巴。他的耳朵是蓝色的，上面有毛。他有一个像山羊一样的小肚子。丑陋的怪物说:“你看起来很厌烦。我能帮你吗?” Alex感谢可怕的怪物，可怕的怪物给了她一个愿望。Alex 要求玩她的玩具。

突然，那个令人厌恶的怪物消失了，Alex 醒了过来。她从床上爬起来，看看是否还需要去上学。

The Shocked Knight

震惊的骑士

作者：Bolin  国籍：中国   

指导教师：Samina&Zack

Once upon a time, there was a knight called Link, and he was brave. Link had a friend called Colin, and Colin had a Switch games console, and Link had a wicked dog. They lived in a high-tech house. 

One windy afternoon, Link wants to play Switch with Colin, but his wicked dog says “NO!!! YOU CAN’T PLAY WITH COLIN!!! READ THE BOOK!!!”

Later that afternoon, Link meets a witch. The witch has red ears, a black face, blue hair, pink hands, and green feet. The witch always eats blunt pencils. The witch is grotesque. 

The witch says “You look upset. Can I help you?” 

Link thanks the witch and the witch gives him 1 wish.Link asks to play with Colin for 5 years. 

Then suddenly the witch disappears, and Link wakes up. He runs to Colin’s home but Colin is already playing the 2-player game with his friend Shloe, and Link is shocked. 

从前，有一个骑士叫Link，他很勇敢。林克有一个朋友叫Colin，Colin有一个Switch游戏机，Link有一只邪恶的狗。他们住在一所高科技房子里。

一个刮风的下午，Link 想和Colin玩Switch游戏，但他的恶狗说：“不！！！你不能和Colin玩！！！读这本书！！！”

那天下午晚些时候， Link 遇到了一个女巫。女巫有红色的耳朵，黑色的脸，蓝色的头发，粉红色的手和绿色的脚。女巫总是吃钝铅笔。这个女巫很古怪。

女巫说：“你看起来很沮丧。我能帮你吗？” Link感谢女巫，女巫给了他一个愿望。Link要求和Colin一起玩5年。

然后突然，女巫消失了，林克醒来了。他跑向Colin的家，但Colin已经在和他的朋友Shloe玩双人游戏，Link感到震惊。

-Grade 3  三年级-

All About A  

关于A

作者：Daniel  国籍：中国  

指导教师：Brian&Ruby

In April me and my friend Kyle went to America to see our English teacher, Miss Abby. We couldn’t find Miss Abby. 

Me and Kyle had an appetite. We found the most awesome restaurant named Al’s. We ate some ant appetizers. We ate some angry alligator applesauce. We also ate some small animals. 

After that we arrived at our airplane. We acted like we were astronauts. We flew through the air up, up and away!

四月，我和我的朋友Kyle去美国看我们的英语老师Miss. Abby。我们找不到Miss Abby。

我和凯尔有胃口。我们找到了最棒的叫做Al's餐馆。我们吃了一些蚂蚁开胃菜。我们吃了一些愤怒的短吻鳄苹果酱。我们还吃了一些小动物。在那之后，我们到达了飞机。

我们表现得像宇航员一样。我们在空中飞起来，飞起来，飞走了！

A Time I Was Late 

有一次我迟到了

作者：Ka Man 国籍：中国香港 

指导教师：Brian&Ruby

One day I forgot my homework at home.I went back home to get it. When I got home there was a big dragon using it’s fire to light my homework. I quickly did my homework once more. 

I left for school again. 

On my way to school I saw the gingerbread man. He said, “giddy up, giddy up, as fast as you can! You can‘t catch me I’m the gingerbread man!” I was hungry so I chased after him. 

Finally, I caught him and ate him all up. 

Then, I heard a farmer say, “Can you help me catch my chickens and ducks so I can separate them?” I decided to help the farmer. It was hard work separating the ducks and chickens!

Once I was finished, I ran off to school. I was just in time for the school bell. Oh no! I had lost my homework! I ran back to the farm. A duck was making paper airplanes with my homework and flying it into the mud puddles. 

I plucked it from the mud, wiped it off and ran back to school. My teacher was there with her arms folded. I said, “wow, do I have a story for you!”

有一天我把作业忘在家里了。我回家拿了它。当我到家时，有一条巨龙用它的火点燃了我的作业。我很快又做了一次作业。我又去上学了。

在我上学的路上，我看到了姜饼人。他说：“快，快，快！你追不上我，我是姜饼人！”我饿了，所以我追他。最后，我抓住了他，把他吃光了。

然后，我听到一个农民说：“你能帮我抓我的鸡和鸭，这样我就可以把它们分开吗？”我决定帮助那个农民。把鸭子和鸡分开是一项艰苦的工作！

我一做完就跑去学校了。我刚好赶上上课铃。哦，不！我把作业丢了！我跑回农场。一只鸭子正在用我的作业做纸飞机，然后把它飞进泥坑里。

我把它从泥里拔出来，擦干净，然后跑回学校。我的老师双臂交叉在那里。我说：“哇，我有故事给你听吗？”

文章转载自：【北大附属嘉兴实验学校】